Mans0n's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[P] - Needles]

not enough

Percussion! i mean it does sound DnB'ish but it needs stronger loops. melody and bass are pretty cool and would fit for DnB. also some of the breaks you used are pretty cool!
im gonna give this a 5/5 to help your score
but actually is 4/5
becuase is can be better!
check out my new Dance to Me (preview)

Pezmobile responds:

Thanks, and It's kinda a mix of DnB, ambient and Hip-hop, thats why it doesn't sound completely like DnB should. Thanks for the review!

[[Lotus] wip]

Pretty cool

but the lead is really loud and makes everything offbalance. you should also try adding some delay to it to stretch the sound out. also, maybe filter and eq the bass if not already. Other than that all i can suggest is add in more sounds to make it a more full song.
4/5
check out some of my stuff
like my project
Dance to Me (loop)

zomgkerrie responds:

i'm still learning how to do the filters and eq and whatnot. youtube tutorials are teaching me a great deal lol. i will be sure to learn those things so that i can follow your advice! thanks for the help so far. planning on working on it some more this week. i will be sure to check out your stuff as well. thanks for the listen!!! Kerrie

[[EpicM] Don't ask.. trying out]

pretty cool

i like it!
not too oldschool classical but more newschool. gj on this,
bet that girl likes you now xD
4/5

EpicM responds:

she broke up 3 days after she heard it <.<
ah well, glad you like the song :)

[Releasing (P)]

Pretty cool

like the intro, but the first transition wasnt very good with the melody change. other than that this is cool percussion is pretty typical but thats alright. atleast it doesnt sound samply. 4/5 on this, also the bass reminds me of Deadmou5's God is a DJ rmx
so gj on that!
also if you can check out my new Dance to me (loop)
peace

photosyntesen responds:

thank you i can check out your song out later :)

[Pound Style of Dance]

pretty good

it can use ALOT of work but its not bad.
the lead your using isnr very great at all and isnt really right for a Dance song. percussion isnt bad but can be better. dont use fl studio samples too btw!
4/5
check out my new Dance to me (loop)

Raigon50 responds:

Thanks. I actually agree with you. It can be better, but I didn't have much to work with (that's why the lead synth sounds the way it does. I had to use Paranation's Moltov sample in there somewhere.)
And yeah, it's not right for a Dance song cause it's genre is Techno...
Also, I actually didn't use any FL Studio samples. I did use samples, just not from there.

And finaly, about you'r song "Dance to me", who do you think gave you that first rating of 5? ^^

[Dream Chaser (F-Zero X) Remix]

pretty cool

but yea that crash is too loud and sticks out alot. also the leads could use some filters or compressing because they are also loud and pretty raw. 4/5

MoNkEyBoY1993 responds:

well thanks a bunch for the feedback, and i'm glad u took the time to listen :D

[[SD] Trippin']

wow

Very impressive if you actually used nothing but Sytrus. Bass sounded sweet untill it you slowly took the filter off of it. or compresser. sounds to raw without it but is still good. pads and background stuff you can kinda figure you made with sytrus. but for the most of this song if you didint say you made it with sytrus i probly wouldnt have noticed.
whoch means u did a GJ because i can usually point that stuff out.
4/5
and if ya want check out some of my stuff
like Dance with me (Mans0n)
7 a.b dr0p
and Crystals song

SupraDarky responds:

Yep, all Sytrus! Glad you like it, thanks for the review.

[Rave is My Drug]

Pretty tight but

the kick is hella weak and knocky.
add more layers or get better kick samples.
leads are pretty advanced and so are the melodys.
they sound great.
Very GJ on this!
im very high off techno atm :)
check out some of my songs like Dance with me (Mans0n)
Breakd0wn, and Crystals song (updated)

Chaoticstyle responds:

haha hey ty man. and i used hardcore kicks not like techno kicks. but ty for the review. :D

[M - Apex Predator]

not too many

DnB elements, beat seamed a little too simple for DnB. however the intro was amazing GJ on that. it really catches your attention.
4/5
check out some of my tracks if ya want
like 7 A.B dr0p
Dance with me (Mans0n) and
Breakd0wn
thanks bye!

Melophobik responds:

I actually agree with you on that one. I didn't think the beat I first introduced sounded too much like DnB but I did like how it fit into the song.
So to get the DnB sound the song needed I gave the second chorus more DnB-like drum loops.

[To Un-Believe]

takes awhile to build

but its good and ambient. has the trancy feel from the trance bass that starts around 20 secs.
dont like the arp at 1 min 6 secs. too generic almost.
other than that this is good 4/5

PerfectTheft responds:

thanks, i'm glad to hear that people like what i have to contribute.