pretty decent for your first try
my first advice dont use FL samples, and if you do eq'ing and compression will make the kick sound better, since its waay too weak. and in the beginning it sounded like your trying to replicate the day and night lead melody.
if it wasn't a demo i would have worked on it A LOT more lol i know it sucks :)
Its not bad
though, after the first drumroll i thought it was going to buildup from there, but it didint. fix that and it will be better. other than that its not bad. 4/5
overall pretty good except
the buildup is very weak, i was expecting a kick to come in but there wasnt. Need to add a nice fat kick in there, and it would be 25% better.
very good song
although not the type of trance i listen to, but its nice calm and relaxing. the description matches the song. only thing wrong that i see is the kick, its not loud/ deep/ phat enough. other than that all the tribal sounds and ambient tones maker it sound awesome overall. keep it up cause you got talent. and what program do you now use if you dont use garageband anymore? i use fl studio 8 xXL
Bass is killing my ears
do something about that lol, its soo intense and loud. other than that pretty good rap beat/ song you got goin here.
i bitcushed the hell out of it, its a normal 12 bit drum sample reduced to like a 2 or 3 bit sample, i like it. but no one else does.shit
also not bad
dont like the melody once it progresses but rather when it was simpler. other than that its not bad at all. percussion kicks ass, but the kick is a little weak. other than that also pretty good song here.
heyheyhey this isnt half bad
the into is really good, the layered claps sound really good with the bleeps and bloops. the only thing i would and am complaining about is the lead, its a just a tad bit too loud. other than that this is really good. true techno song right here. keep it up and thanks for reviewing my stuff btw.
no prob
Only complaint here is...
the kick is waaay too weak, sounds like you used ( pretty sure you did) fruity kick. what I do that helps beef up your kicks is clone it and like the first one would have the volume at 25% and then make that be the first kick, then get another kick sample ( a diff one) and adjust the volume. and do that untill you got your kicks to sound the way you want, then last layer them together. hope this helps if you didint already know this.
lol thanks for the review and tips.. i did know that tho.. and no i dident use fruity kick.. i cant stand it really :P i just dident have the big experience in making a good kick back when i made this track.. and also.. unfurtunatly this track was made before my HDD died.. so i lost the FLP file.. i only have the mp3 of it cus i uploaded it to another side long ago. if i ever get my hands on a tool so i can get acces to that damn HDD then ill fix it.. ill also fix allot of my other old tracks.. but atm i have no chance of recovering them. but still.. thanks for your review.. and thanks a bounch for the tips.. i love helpfull reviews :P
this actually isint bad
at first it sounds really crappy with the lead by itself, but then when other elements kick in it sounds and is better. overall pretty decent, if anything when you get bored you should expand on this. goodluck
yeah i know i should expand it but im afraid it wuld just get boring.. i dont know what i could fill on top of this to make it longer.. was just a experiment with pitch on slayer. but i gues ill look into it again.
The into is the best
the kick and the bass sounds very nice. did you sidechain the kick to the bass? because it sounds like it. piano sounds charming. short review, but i dnno its a great song nice and relaxing 5/5 9/10 lol.
lol thanks. and the kick and bass is on two different mixer channels but the volume on the bass is folowing the kick. recorded that manuel cus a compressor couldent do it right. thanks allot for the review^^
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