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[Trance Anthem (juicedmaster)]

pretty good

but the leads sound generic and are not really trancy. also your drums are slightly loud. though nice bass when it comes in. this is good overall, but it needs more elements! 4/5
check out my new song if you can

juicedmaster responds:

its the first 'trance' track ive ever tried to make thats worthy of uploading to ng, its still not finished so ill re-upload it when its done, thanks for your comment :)

[Minimalism (Day of Trance #3)]

Very good start!

this really good, but there are a few things wrong. for example some of your variations and breaks ( where you stop the snare drum and melody) are good but dont really go with the song ( the way you used them). Also I think you should work on you transitions in general. Use crashes sound FX when something else comes in to make it sound better ya know? and I know from experience becase I would also just sit down and make a song in a few hours and think it was totally awesome. then I would go back the next day and would find alot of errors or spots where it just didint sound that good.
I think if you spent like 4 to 5 days on this for 3 hours a day it would sound very pro. 4/5
And do you think you can check out some of my new stuff?
thanks

jxl180 responds:

Thank you for the review.

[Blades of Hattori Hanzo]

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but i didint care much for the intro. once the song got to 1:30 it got really good.
nice bass/bassline and awesome percussion (though its a little loud).
also i suggest working on some of the transitions. because when the song changes it sounds a little rough. though overall this is really sick!
Mind checking out my newest song, thanks!
4/5

S3C responds:

personally the intro is my fav. part. I can see why you might not like it, it's not really trance in the intro :P

any suggestions on how to mae the transitions a bit smoother?

thanks for the review! sure i'll check out your newest song. I may not or not review it tho (hey you didnt ask me to :P)

[Feeling Bit Adventerous?]

WOw

Needs alot of work.. volumes are seriously out of whack.
leads/bass are waaay too loud. also after the intro, the song is the same untill the end. try throwing in some variations in the melody, and percussion.
3/5

[Vizionz of Purity (WiP)]

OMG

U LEARNED TO USE PIANO ROLLZZ!! OMGGG YOU CAN MAKE A SIMPE DRUMBEAT!
OMG U USED AN EQUALIZER! OMG UR SO PRO AT MUSIC NOW DUDE, U USED AN AUTOMATION CLIP AND NOW YOUR THE EXPERT!
LIKE SRLZY THIS IS THE BEST SONG EVAR! (YEA RITE)

georgem124 responds:

I used the piano roll in my very first song actually. Automation was discovered in my DJ LOL contest responce and I understood EQs before i started fl.

Good job, dumbass.

Yet again, thanks for checking this out.

[Qlimax Explosion]

First rul,e

of audio portal... dont ask to not be 0 bombed or its going to happen X3
its a shame you dont listen..

georgem124 responds:

Yeah, I know that rule. Anyways I don't give a shit about zeros, the no zeros comment draws in reviews. THATS THE SECOND RULE (:

Now stop being a dumbass. All this because I offered help? seriously?

[<-GM124-> Mountain view Trance]

gay

generic, overused samples, eq'ing problems, transititons suck, and this is just overall crap
GJ, 1/5!

georgem124 responds:

Old song...

Notice how you review one of my oldest. Basically you choose to review something half my musical career ago, and even then its 500x better than your piece of shit music (:

[- LD - 3xOsc Love]

Wierd

But also happy in a wierd way.
all the synths are awesome
and show 3x Osc's full potential!
I usually use it in most of my songs
for sweeps/leads/bass
this thing does do it all.
5/5

Breed responds:

Welllllllllll........This is the product of a massive amount of intoxication, A chick flick, a lost remote, and a impossibly sticky feeling couch, followed by an apparent late night music session of which i have no memory. So I will probably take it down. But thanks for the kind words!